Prostitute my inner core
Lacerate my tongue with shards of broken glass
Eventually I will release my pain
Ascending to a higher plain
Slit my heart open with a lover's kiss
Undue my soul
Rescue me from the torment in my head
Escape into shadowy dreams, filled with sorrow
Ask me to accept what you're offering
Nonchalantly, I will bow to you, as you close my eyes
Don't deny me this chance to finally see
Painful as it is
Asystole is a safe place to hide
Incarcerated in solitude, wanting to escape this torment
Now, you see me laid bare, bleeding into your your hands
Author notes
This is a wee tiny part of me.. but mostly it follows some deep conversations with an intriguing girl.. Thanks JD for the inspiration... hehehhehehehe Come see my Dark Side
Written September 22nd, 2003
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Goodness me, it's like, um Slipknot
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Within the diastole to hide – the cardiac confusion, seeks the stealthy nightshift nurse to warp her retribution…
A sable fable on the table – warpedly wrought I thought – lol good stuff – JD’s good for you!
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A dark side of Miz Chilly, I see. Great poem, Gill. It's like a private look at someone else's inner fear.
Interesting pic, too
Dee -
well, i studied the pic, and didn't really see much in it to be adult! but, just the same, it's one you could ponder over for a while, and still keep seeing something different...
great piece you wrote to go along with it, by the way!
blessed be
mike -
and all I could say was... what is the price...
$$$ and ???
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I am trying to understand these dark side poems that I have seen you posting. It takes a while to get used to. Very strange picture, was not having any clue what it was about.
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I am entralled..... dazed I was through the whole poem..... now why does this poem make me want a girl.. hehe
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Hella good stuff. Though I would like to see the pic
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well now! the good nursey has a dark side!! imagine the possibilities!!! it boggles the mind, not to mention the other body parts...
one of your best efforts, in my humble opinion.
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Raises eyebrows at Gills darkside
I loved it
You go girlfriend
But hey I didnt get to see the pic where is it?
I posted a new one too
Come see me sis
Luv luv luv ya
Susan~~~~~
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Ahhh, Gill, we all have a dark side. This one is dark alright, and what rich metaphor! Gosh, I love this... I guess the pnly problem is if you hide out too long... the heart won't start to beat again... sigh... must ponder all the symbolism for a while.
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This poem flowed very well and expressed much deep secrets that we all have and hold onto. You did a great job with this. I do have but one suggestion I felt that you over used the word torment and it deducted from the flow of the poem... Im sure you could fine an alternitve word with out much problem
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Johnathan
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Gill
Wowsers girlfriend!!!!!!!!
I kinna like your dark side
, but the picture kinna scared me , and what the heck was in her mouth? 
Well, in case you don't know by now, I LOVE everything you write
Karen
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i like it, even if it is dark and bloody.
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Sends up balloons!
This is poem is full of
wonderment to me..
messages bold and so many unseen..
BRAVO
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Oh, and I don't think the pic is really all that adult..maybe in context, but ..honestly, as far as being offensive..NOPE
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Yes..she is quite inspirational, but I shall never forget the Schwetty Weiner days.
Good times, good times.
Great write, Gilly, sometimes we need to jump into that part of our psyche and write out the demons in order to find enlightenment
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I can relate with this today. tho I am in a shitty mood. Very well done. I enjoyed. Lady Raven
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"Asystole is cardiac standstill with no cardiac output and no ventricular depolarization; it eventually occurs in all dying patients."
...but then I guess you knew that!
I shall continue to ponder this one and come back to it later.
Take care & best wishes.
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weird is good
This is a cool piece..... weird and wild picture with a taunting poem to match. It works well. I love all these comments on this one too. I think most you are qualified "nuts"....... lol
Monk -
Jude you bad girl!!! LOLOLOL
Jen.. send some factor30 over please
Rodney.. I am glad you like weird
DP... glad you enjoyed it
Thankst to all who have commented
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Undue my soul... very nice. You're a great poet and I look forward to reading more.
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shiver........you need some sunlight, and obviously some concealer that skin needs some attention
lacerate my tongue with shards of broken glass. hmmmmmmm I had a papercut on my tongue a couple times.....I think that hurt plenty, Ill let you do the broken glass, unless of course Brad Pitt is there to kiss it better, then Ill chew on as many bottles as you got RAWR
I like your dark stuff its yummy.
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Thick and solid with a dark cloud feel.
Awesome piece with a cool pic, what a combination.
Thank you for sharing.
Rodney
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Ja, you do, but only if I get to tie you to the bed afterward. humps lustily
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Oi!!!! do I have to swim the pond and spank ya???!!!! ner ner nerrrrr ner
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Haha points finger Silly nursey can't spell. Ne ner ne ner neener. ROFLMAO
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see now I can't bloody spell either..ROFLMAO
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ROFL.. nitwit!!! LMAO.. insomniac sonambulist lovely..that she is
~GILLY~xxxx
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Don't you mean inept twits my dear? Perhaps an insomniac that can't read properly this early?
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Mucking fuddled friends I like... and you are weird too.. but hey, guess what.. I like that too..
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Is this your roundabout way of stating the obvious? That being that I am crazier than a shithouse rat? /sigh/ We know this already. Or is it just phobias and invisible men? Perhaps it is all of it, not to mention my fascination with other, more severe nutters and all that rot. Maybe a razorblade for good measure and a dose of Tennessee bourbon....
She fell onto the stones
Shrieking like yesterday was tomorrow
A wolf man snapped in her mind
While her flash glared from the coal
Then there came the blood flowing
Her eyes glazed and a wraith
Danced in shafts of candlelight,
Just out of reach
She said "Shh, it's all in my head.
Only in my head. while static noise."
Crackles on fingers that fixate and
Draw her into what she imagines is there
A mild annoyance and a few shakes of
Her muddled head as it burns so easy
Flowing down and out, searing away the
Pain of it all and she giggles,
Humming her mad girl's love song
Glistening like tears scarred by moonlight
She sleeps with a black pillow in her arms
Vanilla and cigarette smoke reminds her to relax
As she drifts in the arms of the
Invisible and the Imaginary
Edited on Sep 22, 8:43 because 'I am inept and quite stupid'.
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dark side indeed!
I found the images really interesting.
Regards
Kwas -
If escher and geiger got together and had a kid, she would probably sketch something like this picture. I have to give the poem props as well. Though I don't know what Asystole refers to. But my ignorance is my own.
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Slit my heart open with a lover's kiss
Undue my soul...I loved these lines.....undue my soul...wowww thanks..
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Hhheheheheheh Thanks for the comment Lute.. Y eah I'll be back with some sunshine soon
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yowzer. Nurse chilly goes a dark place, Lute be cold.
More sunshine please.
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