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My guardian, goodbye

You touched my face
And held my hand
You helped me breathe,
And understand
It'll be okay, learn to laugh
Be true to yourself
And take a stand

It was because you loved me
It's because you cared
You didn't just watch me die
You didn't just stare
You helped me, Saved me, Healed me
Put me on my feet

You touched my face
You held my hand
You kept me close
So close...
When we started to move away
I thouhgt I'd be okay
But the truth is I'm not
And it's too late..
You love someone else

The pain pulses throuhg my chest
As I see you pass by
Your smile, your laugh
Makes me want to cry
Because the truth is.. You'll never be mine

After all thats happened
I loved you so much
Your soul, your being
After all that You've done
All I can say...
Is thank you~

Ijustwant...youtobehappy...becauseyousavedme..fromdeath...
theres..somuchmoreinlife...
..thankgod..igottomeetyou....

Author notes

lol, I promise! This poem is about.. finding a love and then losing them.. becuase they were just a guardian to you...the pain is great but you rather go throuhg it then have never meet them

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  • Engra
    September 6, 2007
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    oh this one hit the spot, you will be in the final list i know.
    LOVE ENGRA


    • fire angel 088
      September 7, 2007
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      Thank you! I really Liked this poem.. the more I read it the more I think it is! Good luck with ur contest

  • TwizTed ThoTz
    September 6, 2007
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    this poem is something i can relate 2. i've wanted 2 tell someone this 4 a long time but i never knew how 2 put it n2 words. you said it the best way any1 could have. i didn't think any1 went through this but me. it's good 2 know that im not the only 1. kudos.