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8-31-07

depressed.supressed.
an ugly absess
a knawing debt
will consume you

a theif of the sun
the fears you unearth
will be replaced
by your soul; in a grave

Righteousness fumbles
the wicked prevail
a victim of money
forever insane

All that we hope for
all that we love
will suffer in masses
our cries set aflame

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  • Broken Faith
    September 7, 2007
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    Ingenious.

    Truth to the point of being blunt. Amazing write. 3 more happy faces for Madison.

  • emLeejo
    September 6, 2007

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    melissa was right on the different lol, but whats a poem without it being different hello lol but i love it.. ur a genious!!


  • MissyAnn
    September 6, 2007

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    a theif of the sun

    I like that! sounds like something i would write.

    All that we hope for
    all that we love
    will suffer in masses
    our cries set aflame

    brilliant, just what i thought! lol diffrent but just as creative.