Up in the blue sky
I am going to be forever,
for you taught me to.
Author notes
I haven't really ever done a Haiku, but here's my first try...I hope it follows the 5-7-5 thing...I think it does.
I hope you enjoy this and it fits the standards...
A contest entry
- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is really great for a first attempt at a Haiku!!! Really Really Really Great!!!
I follows it perfectly and its so sweet... keep up the good work!!!
Claire-Anne
(ps-- sorry ive been away so looong from you) -
This was really good to be your first try at haiku, Jessica. I think that you have a really good talent and should continue to use it...
Keep up the great work! -
this is the 5 7 5
but Haiku
also is a small poem
just in itself
Riftkin -
Very good
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