As He watches Her
The love of His life
The one whom forever was meant for
He looks in disgust
At His mortal flesh
He goes to Her and asks
If He too shall live by Her side forever
She looks at His eyes
So filled with pain and tears
And She does it
She feels the warm trickle
Of His life down Her neck
His blood taste so good
But as He falls, She lets go
His body hits the ground
Lifeless and motionless
Did I take to much?
Or was it He was never ment to be
With me in this
Eternity of lust for blood
To hunt the kind He once was
Just to survive
She leaves His body
Lying on the damp forest floor
Not knowing if He would live or die
Then He leaps to his feet
Fangs bared, wings spread
He runs to the villiage
His thirst is immense
But they catch Him
He is burnt alive
The mistress of the night
Finds out and dies of heartbreak
Thus brings forth
The end of Their kind
On this rock we call Earth
Or did it?
Author notes
yeah this is a dream i had a while back. i feel as though it has some signifigince
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fantasticly written, the emotion of the two is so beautiful the fact that she wants him, but also doesnt a little, i noticed....its ingenius...great write! VAMPIRES!
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Very interesting. Vampires rock! I love the ending. It was wicked. Very well done!
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mmm I love Vampires! there such a turn on! this is great!
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*HUGS* Exactly what I was looking for!!!!!!! I LOVE it!!!!!!!
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i loved it. it was awsome lov u
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interesting dream i like how you ended it with a question. nicely done.
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I like this one. Its different, and I think its kinda cool. I like the following lines:
He goes to Her and asks
If He too shall live by Her side forever
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I like it a lot...very vampireish!
I KNOW this is one of the best I've read today!
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i like it! and the vampire thing lol.... wonder where that came from.... did they like pie? but seriously very good i like it how you make something often betrayed as evil seem so innocent and vulnerable to the hardships of human life
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Wow man, that's great! I need to read that again for the third time, great work Rock!
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