I was typing at my computer,
it was night.
I lowered my monitor's luminance,
it was too bright.
While I tried to do work
instead I fantasized.
about lust and sex.
I love my gender, age, color and size.
I called up ManHunt
and listed an ad.
Just moments later,
I had found a fag.
When he arrived I lept
onto my cold damp bed
To let him get to work
I propped the pillow under my head.
We let the games begin
while the moon admired.
And onto my tired closed eyes
the last shot was fired.
He wasn't caucasian,
I noticed after my facial.
He was black or at least dark:
My first interracial.
A contest entry
- Darken Us Up with Your Comedic Genius and Romantic Attitude by So Strange.
1000 points, ended September 7, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gay & Lesbian Erotica! by SinningSaint.
355 points, ended September 29, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gay Pride/Relationships/Love/ Anything by APoetViolinist.
450 points, ended April 28, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I asked for no erotica. I'm very sorry this wasn't really what I was looking for.
Despite that it is an interesting write, very different. -
different indeed.
though the poem was, indeed, about gay erotica. I don't think it was quite what I was looking for in my contesnt.
however, all things considered, this was aa very enjoyable piece to read. the rhyming was good, and the situation you described as like none I had read on the site. great work, thanks for entering. -
I completely agree with the-gifted, because this was definitely different and something like that which I was wanting for this contest...good job.
Good luck in my contest!
Also, annoymized (whoever you are), I am only 16, but I can handle anything, so this is really got a chance in this contest! -
great write. different, which makes it interesting. good luck in the contest.
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I originally wrote this for the 'Darkness' contest but revoked my entry when I discovered the author was a 15 year old girl.
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