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a beautiful girl

A beautiful girl with gorgeous eyes
a hidden world
of hurt and lies

A beautiful smile to hide the pain
living life
with nothing to gain

A pitiful future with dreams of tomorrow
embracing the world
with arms of sorrow

The rotting flesh of a beautiful life
all once seemed
so delicate and nice

A beautiful girl submerged in blood
hitting the floor
with a final thud

A precious soul that didn't last
a gorgeous girl
who's life had passed

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