Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Svelte

Missing image

The word slips off the tongue
oozing over the mind
painting an image of lean,
yet sensuous. 

Elevating the lust caricatures
of testosterone committees
about matchless femininity,
placing their definition of paragon
in a skeletons with skin
upon a pedestal,
leaves shadows stretching
across the faces
whose real goddess
resides within,
having a true beauty
not measured in inches.

We will ever learn
that body fat and what qualities
make a person truly attractive
are not the same?

Size of one's heart ability to love
is more important
than the width of one's form.

Author notes

Prompt - size zero

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Entwining Beauty
    September 11, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    don't reply please

    beautifully done great write good luck


  • thepoetssoul
    September 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    A splendid poem you have written love the truth in your words.Great imagery and flow This is a great work


    • penman gold member
      September 6, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you for the wonderful comment.