Remember that day when we first met. you said hello to me outside of class. i thought about you the whole way home. who you were. what your interests were. i just couldn't get you out of my head since our first introduction. then we exchanged phone numbers. we called each-other during the day. and i just couldn't forget your smile engraved within my mind. it was like magic had casted a spell upon me. a Vail covering my world to reveal a fantasy land. our first date. playing pool and getting to know each-other. by the end of the night i wanted to kiss you, but i chickened out. i didn't know how to express my feelings for you. our second date, while in the movies, you lifted my chin to give me our first passionate kiss. while the reels play and scenes pass by, our world stood still. caught up in our moment. Remember that day....When we fell in love?
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A contest entry
- Give me something good by beautyamoungblades.
300 points, ended October 14, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Fall in Love... by trista.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Whenever I've fallen in love, it always seemed to sneak up on me. I can never pin-point the day it happened, but I do tend to remember all the little moments that when combined, made it happen. Your write was a very enjoyable glance into another life and another love. Thank you so much for sharing and entering the contest. Good luck and best wishes.
~J.
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this is cute and full of emotion like a passionate story job well done good luck
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this reminds me of way back when , in my school years , falling for that special girl and having your first crush and feeling nervous about wanting to try to get to know her and finding the courage to ask her for her number and when it all falls into place then you realize what you had been missing by not trying earlier but just thinking about it all brings it all back to me , i really enjoyed it
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Aww, this is so freakin' cute! And so sweet! This truly expresses true love! Good job with this! And thank you for sharing!
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GREAT write, I can tell just how happy you are still to this day from those awesome events. Thanks for sharing Made me smile!!!
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awwwwww
this has to be the sweetest thing i've ever read...
terrific job!
i love how you said and the scenes passed by, our world stood still
awww this a perfection writting on love
stephanie
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in all actuality it is exacly how i still feel to this day! thank you so much for reading!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww
This piece is soooooooooooo real. It's so easy to slip into the words that flow here on this page. ANYONE who has ever been in love will replay their first kiss after reading this. Loved it
BY THE WAY lol...has anyone ever mentioned how cute that smug little grin is you're wearing in your pic on this page?
Just thought I'd pass that info on
Nicely done Jasmine
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awww thank you so much! he is definately a winner in my book! he still gives me goosebumps! thank you for reading!
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