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Where Are You?

three days have passed
since i last talked to you
i miss hearing your voice
where are you?

waiting patiently by the phone
hoping it will ring
praying your name will show up
where are you?

i don't know what happened to you
i hope you're all right
i hope nothing bad has happened
where are you?

you don't answer your phone
when i try to call
you don't check your voicemails
where are you?

i hope she has not driven you
over the edge of sanity
i'll always be here for you
where are you?

i wish you would call
give me a sign
i hate not knowing
where are you?

the pain of not knowing
if you're alive or dead
all i want to know is
where are you?

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  • Shuberth
    December 18, 2008

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    very sad ! no matter where he is but ur consern and so you wanna know... this was very sad and i can feel the pain in this...

    Shuberth

  • redderthenroses
    October 4, 2007
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    ...awsome...well not really...i was around i saw your pain...this really moved me


  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    September 19, 2007
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    he's always in your heart.


  • bookbandit
    September 6, 2007

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    car that's great. it's okay that it's really repetitive, it pulls the whole thing together, it's kinda hard to do that with free verse sometimes. believe me, that's pretty much all i write! lol. great job.