With a kiss you said you loved me
Then that day you set your soul free
No goodbye no reason not even a note
You just ran a razor across your throat
Found on your bed in covered in blood
A kiss and then you released your flood
I found out what made suddenly leave
Your parents for some reason seemed relieved
I couldn’t let go so I broke into your house
Silent as a snake quieter than a mouse
In to your fathers office and dug around
And in his closet in a shoebox some tapes I found
Now I am back home and I just hit play
And watched till night turned to day
I think I threw up a few times in between
Even bit my lip to stop myself from screaming
Tape after tape it just got painfully worse
And how I hate them for giving you this curse
To them you were nothing but a slave
Whipping you with a stick if you didn’t behave
Taking your virginity and giving it away to their friends
Raping both holes making you lick out their rear ends
Too much agony I cannot bare to watch anymore
They turned you from an innocent child into a whore
So now I am standing in your living room
Your mother I am sorry I raped with a burning broom
Your father I skinned his penis and covered it with salt
I have decided not to bring their lives to a halt
I am going to do to them what they did to you
I have even nailed them to your bedroom wall too,
Oh they will live and the cops have the tapes
Yes I called them no deserves to get away with child rape
They are here now the police, as I sit on our favorite ledge
To late for me to turn back now as I slip over the edge
They killed you with their sick perverted love
But now you are free with the angel’s above
For my crimes my punishment is hell
And my coffin nothing but an empty wooden shell.
By Kindredblood
Author notes
Don't ask why I wrote this becuase I have no clue, I'm slowly stearing away from gory, hearts not really in it anymore, seen to much of the real stuff to put it on paper.
If for some reason you hate it then dont read it, because I dont give a crap at the moment.
Ignore the mistakes I am too tired to edit.
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Wow.....One thing I admire in poetry is smotion.....and this is filled with so much emotion while beautifully written ...the imagery is amazing.....It left my heart pounding...
Lynda
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I like it, yes its gory but life is gory and to often people don't get what they deserve.
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Well seems to me the parents got their just desserts!
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Wow, I thought Plath was dark! The imagery in this poem is amazing. Could easily put on this person's glasses... scary perspective & situation to be in. My stomach a bit sick, but can't say I see myself relating to the revengeful/vigiliante approach. Liked the structure (or lack of?). Masterfully conveys this person's disgust, anger, and sorrow.
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Jeese man! I have read this, and read it again... visual image was so strong I could have been sick myself. What a powerful write and sadly this does happen.
Sickening as it may be ........
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Woah, gory to the max. Would you just give me a moment to regain my mind again. And this isn't a "I hate this poem" its more of a "freaking bl000dy hell this is brilliant, dark but brilliant and kinda freaky and no one deserves to get away with child abuse."
keep writing and you're a wonderful poet, and thank you for the comments on my poetry.
Claire-Anne
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This is a bit gory as you say, but heartbreaking as well. People that commit those kinds of crimes (rapes, child rapes) should not be allowed to get away with it. Most times they do because the person that they hurt is either too young, too scared, ashamed, or feels at fault. This is tragic in every way but one, they got what they deserved. A wonderfully powerful write. Very well done. Very vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing it.
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I dont hate it.Your an amazing writer.I love this poem it is really good and sad I can relate to it in some ways thank you for sharing. Best Wishes
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