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Focus

A life is coming into focus
One I thought I would never see
Still I'm afraid to hope for it
Cause all of my hopes never become reality
I'll try my best to make it right
I wish I could make him proud
So I'll fight and fight until he'll see
That my life is exactly where he wanted it to be
I'll show him that I'm good
Much better than he thought
Hopefully I won't lose myself
Trying to make him happy

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  • Night once again
    September 6, 2007
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    good to see you back. This is good. Moving forward. Typo on 2nd to last line? otherwise good.