Woman of the Wind
Travelling with the breeze,
across valleys and seas,
amongst flowers and trees,
She is the Woman of the Wind!
Sometimes flying with birds,
others soaring over herds,
she is always travelling across worlds,
She is the Woman of the Wind!
She goes to many places,
she sees so many faces,
love, light and truth, she embraces.
She is the Woman of the Wind!
She is like Time, witnessing all,
Empires that rise, and others that fall.
She can hear but never answer a call!
She is the Woman of the Wind!
She flies, she tries,
She cries, but never dies,
of the wind, she is the eyes,
She is the Woman travelling as the Wind!
By: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by Soulful Woman.
1000 points, ended September 14, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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_Yes_ Creativity / Originality
_Yes_ Imagery
_Yes_ Metaphor
_No_ Emotion
_No_ Reaction
_No_ Relatability
_No_ Fluency
_No_ Powerful Beginning
_No_ Powerful Middle
_No_ Powerful Ending
_Yes_ Connecting Ideas
_Yes_ Interesting Idea Behind Piece and/or a Message Behind Piece
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bravo
This really very finely done with excellent rhyme and wonderful cadence throughout the poem...I liked this poem a very great deal, indeed! bravo... bravo... -
Wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to soar, but we can do it with our souls if we have free will and a mind to take us from the mundane. I enjoyed this journey. Love, c
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Nice,
I enjoyed this mystical Peace within the breeze. Thanks for sharing here, and all the best within the contest! Great job! Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ -
I loved the title...A very well written piece. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman -
"Woman of the Wind", is a grand achievment to behold.You've created and excellent piece and I for one,love it.It has a persona of it's own and you have breathed life into it well.
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