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Staying


Part One - Storm

 

Withering breath of hurricane,
pounding gales and rising waters
howling blasts shake the earth on which we stand;
then eye of calm sets down all around, a sudden peace.

Sun filled skies gentle breezes,
like a wink and nudge from merciful heavens,
birds and animals loosen their grips on mooring places
everything seems to exhale, and settle.

Part two- Seeing her Life

Sometimes, her world was the eye of an unrelenting storm
where damning blasts subside,
and whirlpools of pain ebb to silence
as if they need to rest and gather,
for the passing of the calm
brings another storm, dread hangs in the sunshine
sadness on the soft touch of breeze,
for they pass unkindly.

 

Part three- in her shoes

So thinking, many women in my world
who felt the gentle touch of his love in the dead spot of the storm,
but knew lovers hands as hammers;
enduring thunders and blasts
that only paused to storm, and storm again.

And imagining the eye, standing as a child;
wondering as if beneath calm glimpse of sky
and soft kiss of wind… why? asking
why did they stay, and turning swiftly
to see the coming brunt of darkness

 

[a child being a child]


would step into the fresh puddles,

seeing ripples in the water

my face, my childhood reflections, staying and staying;

deeper answers in shallow waters.

 

 

Author notes

domestic violence is like storm of anger- yet they stay

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  • What a gem ...

    this poem is ... and such reflections nicely shared. I think that you've done a great job and I can see you've got some good talent going for some of your others as well. Keep writing joy


  • MariGoes gold member
    January 2

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    No other moment can be more relieving than when that storm ceases to happen. There are many reasons why they stay, none of them is love though.
    It's hard to those that stand 'outside' of the storm to see those reasons.
    It's sad to see that victims of domestic abuse can get moral support, but very few practical solutions.
    You described the feelings very well in that situation. Your words carry that painful feeling that not many can understand.
    Excellent write!


  • Rheea gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    This is exceptional, you have touched something, that I do not know how you as a man can touch. I stay for a reason.Everyone one has her own I guess. I am one person I must see him well.

  • Gods Precious
    November 20, 2007

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    Great ,Great,Just Great

    the Images are so vivid and real
    There is always a ray of light at the end of each storm and I can see that you portray that here too


  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    October 28, 2007
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    i would like to thank you very much for your entry into this contest for child abuse awareness. i am wishing you the best of luck in this contest as well as in all you future writings. viyanna rosemarie

  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    October 28, 2007

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    i would like to thank you very much for your entry into this contest for child abuse awareness. i am wishing you the best of luck in this contest as well as in all you future writings. viyanna rosemarie
  • Virgoan
    September 16, 2007

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    A beautiful well segmented piece from you my friend. I love the vivid real images in this piece.

    Thanks so much for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    VIRGOAN

  • masterblaster gold member
    September 14, 2007
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    Hi, lovely poem my friend, all the best in the contest, hugs

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    This may be one of my favorites of yours. I love the strength of the storm and yet, the softness with which you write about it.

  • ennovy silver member
    September 7, 2007

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    Well I myself love storms, I find them to be very poetic...I enjoyed this read and I'm staying...Write on O'Talented poet. Excellent read....novy


  • Laura Lamarca
    September 6, 2007
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