Holding hands, smiling and slowly walking
The bride and groom meet to appear before you
Like a knight with his princess
All admire with envious eyes
An exchange of vows
Signing the contract
A party of togetherness
Walking to a honeymoon
The sun sets and the future begins
An exchange of passion
Signing the sheets
A party of togetherness
Walking to a high note
The sun sets and the stars ignite
M is for Making
A is for All
R is for Rights
R is for Rule
I is for In
A is for Amazing
G is for Grace
E is Forever
He will be a husband
She will be a wife
Together they will be
For now and for this life
A contest entry
- Write a poem to be read at my wedding. by tinuelena.
900 points, ended September 23, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Chris that is really good love it -
This was really sweet and I know you're going to hate me seeing this but I couldn't help but notice the "E is Forever" I know what you've done i.e. "is for ever" has been joined together, but it somehow seems a little disjointed. Too be honest I think you've written a beautiful poem that doesn't need the Acrostic part, if anything the Acrostic sort of disrupts it, though I know why you did it. The simplicity and sheer sensuality of the other stanza's are all you need. Well done!
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