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Lonely Darkness ( Part One)

So she starts walking.
Alone and scared, she looks around.
Wanting and, waiting to someone to save her.
But she finds noone.
So the tears starts to fall.

More and more the tears fall.
So then she tries to close her eyes.
Hoping that everthing will go away.
So she closes her eyes for a minute...

She opens again.
Finding her self in the same place.
Along with misery.
Also with the darkness.
That keeps following her.

A sound comes from a distance.
Sounds of horrible screams.
So she covers her ears.
Then the screams gets louder.

She walks a little more.
She feels something following.
So then she looks back.
She see the shadows.
The shadows that has been hunting her all these years.
Not knowing what to do.

She runs terrifield.
Aways from the shadows.
Trying to escape.
But she looks in front of her.

She sees only darkness.
So she walks and walks.
Trying to get out of there.
A place away from the misery that hunts her all these years.

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  • nobumagawaX
    January 22

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    woh this is crazy good!! haha.no seriously it is very deep and dark..a nice read for the people who like the darkness in poetry!