Open the case,
It's laying there.
Music fills your ears,
As you take it there.
Plugging it in,
Playing that chord.
The coward goes wild,
Your the rock star of this show.
The music's blarring,
Heads are banging,
Guitar in hand,
Your playing.
Someone's singing,
The music grows louder,
Everything seems all better now.
Up to the mic,
Singing the lyrics.
I look at you,
And smile.
Not a care in the world,
I sing what comes from the heart.
Our eyes connect,
I smile again.
The song I sing,
Of passion love courage and strength.
Its who I am,
Who I want you to see.
The song comes to an end,
Our eyes disconnect.
For only a moment,
A feeling of accompisment fills you.
Music,
Love,
Strength,
Courage,
Everything you need is in that song.
Can you hear it?
A contest entry
- My Rockin AP Girlfriend by So Strange.
550 points, ended September 11, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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HONORABLE MENTION YOU GOT HERE!
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Ooh! Rockstar indeed yes! It was a tight write but no explanation of I am so and so ect ect but whatever I loved the poem, not as a boyfirend/girlfriend one persay but damn straight it was Rockstar!
Good luck!!
~Katie -
can you hear it... or can you feel it?
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I think this was really good, but you need to explain a bit about yourself, unless you already did.
Also, I wouldn't mind another verse, possibly. I like things to be at least 15 lines and this is only 12 lines really.
Other then that, I think you would have a good chance in this contest. Good luck and may you enter a little more description!
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