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Rose

Shadowy dragons rain down
Thunder, lightening, destruction
Billowing clouds
Darkness surrounds the enlightened

Troubled heroes lie on the ground
Fallen angels on Earth
Brought down by selfishness

Distraught eagles fly overhead
Their peircing eyes
And flawless feathers
Encasing them in truthfullness

Innocence turned evil
Suffocating their morals with deception
Black roses lay on unmarked graves

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  • Lj-
    September 10, 2007
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    Good details.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.