To love a person is happiness itself
To hate a person is pure grief
To like a person is blossoming friendship
To care for a person is true belief.
To care for a person is truly admiring
A slow yet patient feather
It glides to the floor in a peaceful manner
And succumbs to the warmth of mother.
To like a person is friendship formed
In the blossoms of a beautiful flower
Second to love, a meaningful present
That can occur in sweet and sour.
To hate a person is true sadness
An unfortunate curse from the gods
It hides in the darkest of places
And hurts kindred souls.
To love a person is Cupid's wish
A gift from the gods themselves
It hinders in the slowly beating heart
And escapes from glowing smiles.
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST: I WANT LOVE RIGHT NOW. PREWRITES ALLOWED...COME IN AND CHECK OUT by the-gifted.
600 points, ended September 26, 2007, 108 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My love's birthday by Meroza.
425 points, ended March 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Judging:
- Title: It makes me expect more then you deliverd, but yet it is good.
- Is it what I am looking for? Both yes and no.
- Emotions: Its love in it, but not so much as I would wish.
- Wowness: Good to medium wowness.
- Final word: This poem is very well written and cute, even though it was not what I was looking for you score hig.
Your a good writer -
This poem is fantastic! I really enjoyed reading every line of this one!
Best of luck in my contest!
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awww that is so beautiful. good luck in my contest and thank you so much for entering. It gives me hope for a better day. thank you.
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Well written poem. I like the way this poem looks.
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