Single leaf
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Into eternity
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Joining brothers
A contest entry
- momiji by AJ Morelli.
1300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i agree the form adds very little to a lovely write...
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Thank you, I will take that into consideration next time
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i like the metaphorical take on this- i read it as brothers in arms - fallen comrades-
i am not thrilled with the formatting - i think it cheapens an otherwise very strong write
thanks so much for entering the contest
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Thanks for the feedback, I always appreciate it!
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enjoyed the simplicity and truth to this
there is more to this than just a leaf falling joining its kind!
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I appreciate it, thanks! There is more to this poem than what you read, indeed.
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Thanks very much for your kind words and support.
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Nice work! I like how you expressed and figuritively did your words ... Short, sweet and to the point! Best Wishes in this contest friend! I hope you win a trophy
... Thank you for commenting on my poem 
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