Velvet hands paint a
Rippling kaleidoscope –
My own personal nude –
Dripping watercolors,
We slowly slide down
Virgin canvas –
Red and blue meet
In a hot purple haze
As flashes of flesh
Glisten in frantic rainbows
© 2007
Tanya Boutros
A contest entry
- PIF - Quickie (Adults Only) by poetryality.
525 points, ended September 11, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ohhhhhhhhh very colourful. This is just beautiful. Really enjoyed this one.
Nice ob! -
Oh... did you every stroke the page with a magic brush of all the hues love invites. This is very vividly written. You must be an artist, in every sense of the word. I saw so many colors here. Beautiful! Thank you for this entry in my contest and I wish you the best.
Much Love & hearts;
Renee
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Very nice,
sultry and full of healthy pride;
a suduction of self so to speak.
Well done - the muse is happy


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This piece almost describes that thoughts before an artists starts his painting..It really was an enjoyable write. Thank you for sharing.
Soulful Woman
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loved it!
Your poem reads like artwork! I can visualize all the glistening rainbows!
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It's all that white wine you had the other night
Nicely done. This has great metaphors and imagery written, uh, painted all over it. Wonderful, wonderful!
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