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My Own Personal Nude

Velvet hands paint a
Rippling kaleidoscope –
My own personal nude –

Dripping watercolors,
We slowly slide down
Virgin canvas –

Red and blue meet
In a hot purple haze
As flashes of flesh
Glisten in frantic rainbows

© 2007
Tanya Boutros

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  • Talia
    August 11, 2008
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    Ohhhhhhhhh very colourful. This is just beautiful. Really enjoyed this one.

    Nice ob!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 10, 2007
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    Oh... did you every stroke the page with a magic brush of all the hues love invites. This is very vividly written. You must be an artist, in every sense of the word. I saw so many colors here. Beautiful! Thank you for this entry in my contest and I wish you the best.


    Much Love & hearts;

    Renee


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    Very nice,
    sultry and full of healthy pride;
    a suduction of self so to speak.

    Well done - the muse is happy





  • Soulful Woman silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    This piece almost describes that thoughts before an artists starts his painting..It really was an enjoyable write. Thank you for sharing.
    Soulful Woman


  • geminidiva
    September 6, 2007
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    loved it!

    Your poem reads like artwork! I can visualize all the glistening rainbows!


  • Barbara gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    It's all that white wine you had the other night

    Nicely done. This has great metaphors and imagery written, uh, painted all over it. Wonderful, wonderful!

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