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Fractal Reflections

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HE triptoed to and fro between her energy's go glow and fractal reflections of her parallel factual reality relays in fact, fiction and fantasy, unGODlily attracted to his lily : her.

 


SHE, - once torn between LIFE giving support paying lip-service to conform_I_tease rediscovers karmic context known, familiar grown, gears up to foreknown as unblown yet sown spins from Time's weave boll weevil's second take at times taking therefrom, EVIL, and adding thereto LIVE - [s]he saw the light.  Errors edited out, she'll flout doubt without second thoughts.  'I can' defeats Cannae constraints as carriage receives a breath of fresh air away from day-to-day nights as knight's dreams beam team towards serendipity.


THEY flowed on SHarEd pixels, photon win/win spin spilling from illusion or self-delusion confusion to fusion's conclusion. Try angles not angels said Pope Gregory formulating information for unformed nation to be strung on Time's beads. Rose awry awaits bloom, disregards doom tomb's drum boom, as some prime[aval] sum snaps hibernation's suspended animation causal chain. Pinch of salt 'collideoscopic' sand mandela bröt grains  interweave fractal anima without animus outside time line rhyme's selenite rosary.


Chance ON OM dance advances shedding shells from Chelles to Eternity, from 'here' to eternity. Eagle eyed MOON extends sing-song shadow patterns, warp wefts between real-I-tease, unpeels seals, peals without paling beyond the pale, reels round each successive buy line lass_who woo. Poets self heal, as sin is spin – moral gin VERityMOUTH. Frustration fades as empathy catalyzes vision mission clarity, fords and affords humorous humerus interplay's funny-bone facettes. FIRE supercedes IRE, irony PURifiEd.

Free verse talk walk waves along Way side sways, prays, preys from slay oblivion to play rev_elation - revel in pointed yin yang contradictions, in situ “sit I zen” situation standpoints. Sinuous insinuations blow-throw topsy-turvy glow flow through Sphinx’s choice voice rejoicing in labyrinthine closed or close woven pattern play pinpoint ME-anderings. Dazzle dizzy crazy-paving pictogram universe pyramid's crater creator kids parallel kabbalistic code modes few decipher or deem dream-theme schemes accessible. Hope gropes scope in enigmatic holy gram, reacts to wavelength relays clicking on subconscious screens, attempting to avoid cacheless society's disk risk oblivion.

Imagination is life's architect, being the finite sum of infinite opportunities, attracted to or defracted from protracted links between expectation and reality contract - as contacts contract probabilites, soul re_mainS[T]AYing whole, intact, as tact and tactility tease subcontracted substance with DIStracted EASE dissolving disease often leading through convention to misguided conviction.

Reality remains conundrum, paradox docks parade, if choice is pre-ordained. Thus meted meter met her matter matters little if perceptions are immortal streamlined spotlights echoed as idea[l]s tune-tweak leak spheres' muse music, reaping energy, leaping beyond heated arguments. Current or recurrent pluridimensional parallel cycles, pixel paradox, spirals curlicue ad infinitum...

 

Author notes

pics see

http://www.flickr.com/photos/flights_of_fancy/1640637508/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/flights_of_fancy/1640627128/


ON OM ... MOON EVIL ... LIVE upper cased words or consonants denote anagrams and word games.

Thus SHarED should be read to include ... SHE, HE ARE READ DEAR EAR SHARED AS DARE HAS DASH... HARD RED ASH SHE'D SHED etc ... Enjoy !
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round each successive buy line ...

See Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam - Edward Fitzgerald

LXVII
Heav'n but the Vision of fulfill'd Desire,
And Hell the Shadow from a Soul on fire,
Cast on the Darkness into which Ourselves,
So late emerged from, shall so soon expire.


LXVIII
We are no other than a moving row
Of Magic Shadow-shapes that come and go
Round with the Sun-illumined Lantern held
In Midnight by the Master of the Show;

and Brahma Revisited J.R.

Now IS Eternity -
yet what is Time to me ? ... frames in Fate’s dark dark-room.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/1128998

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Not triangles but try angles both as English and as angles of attact converting the anglo-hea[r]then in the 'western isles of the blessed' ...


Not Angles, but angels.
[Non Angli sed Angeli.]
ATTRIBUTION: Pope Gregory the Great, c. 540–604

Probably an oral rendition of words that appear in Bede’s History of the English Church and People (bk. 2, sct. 1; completed 731), in which Gregory — before he was Pope — was presented with some slaves in the market-place in Rome, with “fair complexions, fine-cut features, and beautiful hair.” On being told they were Angles, he said, “That is appropriate, for they have angelic faces, and it is right that they should become joint-heirs with the angels in heaven.” According to Bede, this encounter led him to take in hand the conversion of Britain immediately on succeeding to the Papacy.

http://www.bartleby.com/66/59/26059.html
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Benoît Mandelbrot ... and fractals see

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beno%C3%AEt_Mandelbrot


mandela bröt

MANDALA MANDELA and MANDELLA :
A descendant of the plains dance shield, the mandella is one of the most powerful American Indian items. Prayers for survival, spiritual blessings, ...

http://www.rosiehardman.com/piart28.htm

MANDELA alternative spelling for MANDALA
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mandala


Mandala (Sanskrit maṇḍala "circle", "completion")[1] is a term used to refer to various objects. It is of Hindu origin, but is also used in other Dharmic religions, such as Buddhism. In the Tibetan branch of Vajrayana Buddhism, they have been developed into sandpainting. In practice, mandala has become a generic term for any plan, chart or geometric pattern that represents the cosmos metaphysically or symbolically, a microcosm of the Universe from the human perspective.

BROT : German Bread

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  • Room without doors silver member
    September 7, 2007

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    Outstanding

    Having read a lot of your poems this, for me, revolves around your recurring theme of cause and effect, stretching poetic form and reason to its limits. This reads as a stream of conciousness and the rhymes for me echoed the natural process of writing rhyming poetry where you "try" different line endings in your mind before choosing something that fits. This poem shows an amazing respect for concepts and is intellectual and works on many different levels. I aim when I'm writing to achieve poetry that flows with a sense of simplicity and this poem represents the antithesis of how I write. However, that does not mean I do not admire the achievement of this poem although I think some people will find the relentless flow of ideas difficult to follow.

    Imagination is life's architect

    Brilliant and creative, a literary Picasso.


  • Tangled Angle
    September 6, 2007

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    I definitely didn't comprehend all of this, because it was too much. You had great images, but there was so much you were trying to say, that the development of ideas didn't flow. The phrasing was awkward because of so much detail you packed in there.

    -takes a deep breath-

    ...Yeah... but this was amazing. I really, really liked this. The stuff I did understand when I got to the end I thought 'wow' and I am impressed. But, then again, when analyzing this.. it was just too much.

    Give your ideas some breathing room. They are profound, and deserve some space.



    And because I am curious to see how this will score, lol, and I think you will be curious too.



    Originality/Personality/Emotion: 10/10
    Creativity/Effort: 10/10
    Intriguing title: 9/10
    Title does poem justice: 9/10
    Development of ideas: 7/10
    Flow/sound/line breaks: 2/10
    Cohesion: 7/10
    Overall use of poetic devices: 8/10
    Phrasing/syntax/wording/spelling: 6/10
    Power/Impact/Reaction: 9/10

    Total: 77/100 C



    So you didn't do bad.


    Brilliant ideas. Just work on not going over the top.

    I did like this.

    Because I asked for free verse, this won't be able to win. But I want you to know that I did like it...

  • wbiro gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    BROT- I only have time to ingest that right now... I'll have to return and analyze this later so I can classify it... but one important note- the contest asked for freeverse, and what you have here is prose poetry...!