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Little Brother

I HAVE A LITTLE BROTHER WHO HAS FOUR LEGS AND A TAIL,
EVERYDAY WE LIKE TO GO CHECK THE MAIL,
HE IS FAT AND ROUND,
AND CAN ALWAYS BE FOUND,
SNIFFING THE GROUND,
HE WILL NEVER BE IN IN THE POUND,
HE JUST MIGHT HAVE A BEST FRIEND THAT'S A HOUND,
HE LOOKS LIKE A LITTLE COW,
WHEN HE TAKES A NAP POW,
HE LIKES HIS TREATS THIS I KNOW CAUSE MOMMY AND DADDY SAY SO,
HE MAY NOT BE MY REAL BROTHER,
CAUSE WE DIDN'T COME FROM THE SAME MOTHER,
BUT NO MATTER WHAT PEOPLE SAY,
HE WILL ALWAYS BE MY LITTLE BROTHER ANYWAY,

A contest entry

THIS POEM IS FOR MY DOG THAT I CARE SO MUCH ABOUT CAUSE HE IS MY LITTLE BROTHER

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  • psychiatrists dream
    December 7, 2007
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    cute poem, thanks for entering and good luck


  • wings from god 28
    November 12, 2007
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    my poem

    i will not judge this one cause this is my poem the host of it take a look at it and get back to me about it hope you like it.


  • Asylaarix
    September 6, 2007

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    Yeah ... Rascal is a little cutie boy ... I liked the way you described him in this piece ... you really showed a lot of compassion to the little member of the family ... and you really put emotion into this piece ... I am proud to say that he is a lovely dog ... He does love yout o death ... and boy oh boy ... does he love to do things with you ... Well done ... and sincerely penned ... Much Love ♥♥♥Chantelle♥♥♥