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Lyrical Silence

Lyrical silence
beautiful noise
Screams in the night
silent and still
Shatter the quiet
of the embers above
Communion with darkness
stillness I seek
Prisms in shadows
tear at my eyes
Reach deep inside me
to the depth of my soul

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Don't ask me, it just fell onto the keyboard one night...

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  • EdibleRoses
    September 6, 2007

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    This is one of those poems that I strive to write, where each line can be taken and actually used as inspiration for another poem all together. Kudos. I love itt.

  • AstralPoet
    September 5, 2007

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    very visual emotions i can see, i like the short writing and the choice of words you use. this poem brings many ideas to my mind!