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melissas birthday

sickness engulfs my body
as our souls unite in passion
far away you stand
i hold a rose
wishing you were by my side
as this rose is symbolic of a
love which cannot be brought forth at this time
IN PROGRESSSSS

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  • melissaadair
    September 5, 2007

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    i love your poem baby eveny though i dont understand half of ity but thats ok i hope you get beter