She puts up a wall
we're seperated
by a distance
self imposed
we were close
so close
yet now
this wall of glass
cutting her off
from the world
from me
i try so hard
to reach through
yet i am held
at a distance
meaningless voices
unconsequential conversations
a vast emptiness
where once
a connection resided
now she's surrounded
by her own wall
a glass wall
glass is meant to shatter
so why can't i get through?
A contest entry
- Image Contest by Touchof1der.
700 points, ended September 7, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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"unconsequential conversations" Loved that line. Im so amazed at how similar yet different our writing is.
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Very interesting interpretation of image! I find a myriad of emotional infusion within the lines you have posted here. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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