When all have lost their pleasure
In giving you their time
They're the ones you can turn to
And expect to welcome in
No matter your past or look
They know how you tick
They'll worry when something
Doesn't seem all the same
They'll cry when you plan to go away
So far away...
They'll cry at your last dance
They'll spred you smiles
When you most need it then
They understand your life
Because they know to throw
All their judgements aside
They know how it feels
To go through the things you do
They listen to what you say
What you dream and hope and love
They know every bit of you
And whenever someone asks
They could tell them
Everything about you
Author notes
Might have strayed from the point...but ^-^;; That's how I saw it in me head.
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired by Butterfly Kissed.
350 points, ended September 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Aww!
Damn you!
You made me all sentimental when I was in my hyper-Bloo mode!
x3
This must be one of my favorites of yours. (Did that make sense?
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I don't think you strayed from the point at all! There are different aspects of the quote that you could have focussed on. I really like this poem! You should be really proud of it. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for entering.
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