Luring words
Obstructed compassion
Severed confusion
Troubled dreams
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Written September 21st, 2003
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umm...my head couldnt wrap itself around this one. It's the four lines it automatically makes me think haiku and my brain then shuts off. I become completely unresponsive. Just imagine how I would be if haiku was the national language or something. Jeez...would I be screwed...
On to the next...
~JayLynn
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THIS IS SOOOO COOL. With just a handful of words you expressed so so much! Five stars, man.
xxx mistry (anti-pink
) xxx
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impressive a power with punch in so few lines speaking volumns that wich a thousand words can only fluff to speak what is said here.. pen on!!!
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AN ACROSTIC that describes being lost very well indeed! Short, to the point and quite moving as well to me as I knowI have been, like I guess everyone has been at sometime...LOST. Great write and best wishes ~genielassie~
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quite interesting...makes me REALLY think!
i wrote one like this, with the first letter of each line creating a word, it's called "death to him" if you want to read it...not trying to promote!
great write, very thought-provoking
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Aw. KC likes. ^_^
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