Canceled manufactured dreams
Melt within idle semi-splendor
Producing subtle change
Author notes
Prompt:
Change
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward 10/10/10 by Kari.
375 points, ended September 5, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Already commented on this lol, but not here. Nicely penned piece my love!
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Nice! Different!
Very nicely written, with a good word choice and it is very creative.
Congrats on winning the Silver Trophy, well deserved.
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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OOOH great job with that prompt
10 amazing words that say a lot.
delila
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wow this was amazing and i loved the take on the prompt
it was strongly and beautifully penned
and left me thinking
a well deserved silver
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wow, this is pretty cool my friend
change is good, just wish people would work at it harder sometimes that's the thing, for some people, it's too much work 
sorry, just too much going on and in my head to much *shakes head vigorously*
congrats on the silver
be well and be blessed
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I like this very much. Your poetry always has a lasting thought.
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Wow bro..you did great! Subtle change is a wonderful thing...well done and good luck in the contest!!
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