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Quakes

Fear's shadows
gobble foundation's calm
when time's fingers
shudder dawn.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    OOh this is quit impressive
    Here lies proof a lot can be said in so little
    Well done congrats on the new trophy


    delila


  • Kari gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    Wow, totally impressive You have managed to say a lot in a few words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!