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Emotional Seasons

Improvisions morphed mirals,
Cascading emotions storm
        sporadically
Trickling patchwork tears

A contest entry

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  • Kari gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    This is really lovely! Well penned indeed I enjoyed it and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!