Asian Pearl by Ephiphany at All poetry

Richness succumbs deep within the abyss

this Asian Pearl

magnificiant of my wish

Surrounded by of what I called lavender bliss

suddenly I feel

the passion of

a wind blown kiss that

softly caresses the grooves of my face

warmness I feel in this place

of which I embrace

In a list

Honorables • next in list

A contest entry

PIF Encore (Quickie) by In Too Deep1. 1000 points, ended September 5, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
GIVE ME YOUR HM FOR A CHANCETO WIN GOLD by esroddo. 450 points, ended September 21, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
100 th GROUP CONTEST; by Dove by Partners In Crime. 900 points, ended April 12, 2008, 126 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Kari
April 5, 2008

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This was so delicate, soft, sensual, and a very nice read. I truly enjoyed this piece here.
Wonderful job.
esroddo
September 19, 2007
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Wow such a beautiful and sensual write I could feel the words. thanks for entering. LISA
freestallion
September 18, 2007

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Oh, i really enjoyed reading this poem. It was soft and sweet and packed a punch in spite of being short!
- Ephiphany
  September 18, 2007
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  Thank you so much freestallion
  I appreciate your honest comment on this entry, thanks a lot.
  
  Ephiphany
Seeking Peace
September 8, 2007

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Ohh this w=one was so soft and tender, I think it was like floating on a cloud, just beautiful

Karen
- Ephiphany
  September 8, 2007
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  Thanks,
  I'm trying to get the hang of this Quickies
  I appreciate your comment on this, very much.
  
  Ephiphany
Mykeee
September 8, 2007
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this sounds like a dream - worthy of higher than honorable. nicely done my friend
- Ephiphany
  September 8, 2007
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  I thought so as well...
  but it is, what it is... thanks, you are a great friend to me.
  Piff
MahoganyFlow
September 6, 2007

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Congrats on the HM sis! I agree with Marctheman, this was very soft I liked it !!!!!
- Ephiphany
  September 6, 2007
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  Thanks,
  this was a Quickie Invite last nite, all of a sudden I had to come up with 10 lines in 30 mins...ur gurl had writters block for 15mins...so I sorta rushed thru this, but I guess it did alright for what its worth, huh?
  Thanks again
Marctheman
September 6, 2007
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i love this piece, very soft, and sensual. great good luck in the contest.
- Ephiphany
  September 6, 2007
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  Thank you Marc...
  I've missed you these past few days, what's up?
  Holla at your DIVA when u get in.
Poetic Tasha
September 5, 2007

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beautiful write sis....
you done good

tasha
- Ephiphany
  September 6, 2007
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  Thank you lil sis,
  I always appreciate your stopping by to check on me, I was better on this poem, huh?
  Is my fetish cured, hmmmmm.....only time will tell
In Too Deep1
September 5, 2007
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A soft and enticing take on the prompt, with a wonderful flow. Best wishes in the comp