A desolate wasteland lie before me
The path is so unclear.
I see no trees, no grass, no life behold
And silence is what I hear.
My footsteps keep company for they
Reply to my relentless sighs,
This limbo is irony to my inner stutterings
Before utterings the word dies...
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
Down to ground
Z
E
R
O
My journey has no limit and
I
Cannot end it until I fall to floor and
Die
This desperation has tired me to exhaustion
But I keep on
W
A
L
K
I
N
G
I keep on
W
A
L
K
I
N
G
Crooked lines of whispering winds
Show wrinkles of time past,
Father time sleeps in hibernation
And rears nothing in lands vast.
Mood poisoning's got me facing the camera
With the world a blur behind,
A puzzle of scattered shards reflect me
A face thats grown unkind...
Author notes
Not my usual poetry style but I've got an idea for a trilogy poem watch this space
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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interesting layout
and the first stanza was my favorite.
the rest of it.. lots of descriptions, little feeling, literally, so i'm looking forward to reading the following two.
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~WU -
It kind of makes me wonder what the next two will hold. This is a great setup to possible gold.



