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Ironclad Silence

Broken retrogrades
        casted aside ironclad silence -
            peaceful transgression through time.

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  • ShadowsDream
    September 9, 2007
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    wow. u are a realy good poet. great job kris.


  • suseann
    September 6, 2007
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    This piece vindicates the ideal of change well expressed.


  • Random Thoughts
    September 5, 2007

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    A very calming quality to it,
    Intriguing thoughts it does provoke,
    Well done, I really like this poem!!

    -Brenden


  • Kari gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    Wow Kris, this was totally beautiful. You have done a great job in this one. Well done and the best of luck in the contest


  • Kari gold member
    September 5, 2007
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    Got about five more minutes left

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