Your smooth whispering voice
comforts me, when I have fallen.
The way you gaze into my eyes,
tells me that everything will be ok.
When you give me encouragement,
I know you will always be there no matter what.
The things I love about you,
money cant buy.
I love the way you grab my hand,
when we are walking together.
I love the way you tell me jokes after
a vague's day work.
I love the way you call me little one
every night when we talk on the phone.
Me and you are two pieces of a whole,
so when we are together I'm whole everytime.
For that my darling, I can not live
with out you!
Author notes
(Vampire Angel) this is to my bf AJ i love him to death and he has always been there for me no matter wat. I want him to let him know that i will still love him even if he graduates this year. I wish you luck in the real world i love you!!!
love Stevie
A contest entry
- For Poets with 5 or Less Trophys by Starz of Heaven.
550 points, ended September 6, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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aw this was great!! thank you soo much for entering!!! good luck!
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superb. this is sooo sweet. wonderful to hav sucha friend and i hope it lasts and last. thanks fo sharing.
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That was awesome gurlie!
That was super sweet! i'm talkin bout sweeter than lolipops n popsicles! lol seriously tho, i wish y'all the best n keep up the great work! love, josey -
awww that is so very sweet. i am so glad you and your best friend are like this. thank you for entering my contest and good luck. and tell your friend good luck. it is hard in the real world and some cant do well but with you by his side...i think he will do just fine.
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Thank you so much for your entry. Your words of love are beautiful and tender...I hope AJ smiles when he reads them.
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lol he did read it and he did smile at every word that he read =D
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This is really sweet. Love is an amazing thing to give and recieve.If you would please put your user name in your Authors box.Thanks for entering. Best wishes
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