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Rotten To The Core

All The Feeling I Have Inside
They're all driving me insane
There thing that i could say
But there's a few i can't express

Some are suicidal
Some are of love
feelings inside,
feelings can't hold...

You've rotten me to the core
You're the maggot on my heart
I never want you out of me
We are together
By my poetry

My love for you will never die
If you go out,
there's going to be a big hole
on the bottom of my heart...

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  • xXNishaXx
    September 6, 2007
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    really nice work! keep on expressing yourself like this! I loved it!


  • neverseenfor
    September 6, 2007
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    really good how i feel some of the tim