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My Independence

It's not me trying to pick a fight

It's not me trying to be weird

It's a battle with myself

While the world's against me...

I push so hard... not to make a point

But a statement that I'm me

This might look like a mistake to others

But they aren't me

This battle will never end

The walls that fall on me will never stop

I live with knowing an obstacle is up ahead

But there are obstacles everywhere in life

You just have to hurtle over them

So this battle is my very own battle

And I'm proud

Not like any normal battle

This is an ongoing battle for my very own independence

Author notes

This is about ME for ME and ME lol I hope yall like it

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  • So Strange
    September 6, 2007

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    I enjoyed this...I think you should enter this into my Cool, Independent, Badass Women contest, because it would do fairly well there. I think you worded this well, it had nice flow and I LOVE the meaning behind it, too.

    Keep up the good work, Ariel, and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!