In her eyes I find all the answers to the universe
Amidst her vast landscape of recollections
I find nothing less than pure and factual knowledge
I see all that is sacred
Revealed in her unshakeable faith in what yet remains virtuous in this world
A noble kind of discernment
Mastered in a life she selflessly and bravely lives
A courageous warrior
Valiantly battling for me all my foolish errors
My heroine
Who with one mighty wave of her pen, slays all the dragons that chase me
Never once succumbing to hesitation or uncertainty
She comes to my rescue time and time again
My queen, my goddess
My Mother
Please tell me what you think
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WoW!!! Awesome nicely penned...Takes me to da old times wen i was an infant....Mum i luv u!!!!
Thanks for sharing,
Cheers
FJ
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Very Good
My heroine
Who with one mighty wave of her pen, slays all the dragons that chase me
Never once succumbing to hesitation or uncertainty
She comes to my rescue time and time again
My queen, my goddess
My Mother
Very well said for your mom
Rick
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Interesting theme
It's a theme that I have seen before, very nicely done.
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My poetry takes its shape as I go along...I do have a general idea about what it is I'm writing about, but I'm more concerned with the "tone" of it. I compare the overall feeling I try to convey with words to the importance of colors used in artwork. Thanks for taking the time to read it! Peace! -
Cute
But true! most mothers will died to protect their offspring! You choose your topics a little different than I. I think of something, get all the stored info from my mind, and even looks it up sometimes, write the peice and then give it a title. I think you go about it a little differently. Do YOU?
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