Feast your eyes
On my vanilla peaks
The palatable oasis my lover seeks
His eyes speak volumes as he commences to dine
On my tangible truths intoxicating as wine
Indulge your sight on the curve of my back
I swear it wasn't there before he posed me like that
He holds it in mid-air until we begin to sway
And then like wet sugar we dissolve away
Observe my banquet of delicacies
Luring enough to bring a grown man to his knees
My Latin flavor blends with the brown of his skin
As the brunt of his sweetness remains suspended within
At my table this one man is served
An assortment of unrefined dreams transferred
An enticing display fit enough for a king
So I arch, and beckon my lover back in
A contest entry
- AP Book Contest-- get published! by tinuelena.
900 points, ended September 19, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Is It An All You Can Eat Buffet?
First of all I have to say WOW!! Great Job! This is so visual... I mean every line is tangible, i think because many of us can relate to the situation. Great photo. I must bow to your literary skill. Good Luck in the contest!!!
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Tasty
Your poetry gets more interesting with each submission. This is great and I love the yummy metaphors.
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