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a single thought or care

think positive
even while you scream
think positive
this is just a bad dream
if only it were that simple
the pain searing through my chest reminds me

can i may i
cause myself some harm
just a little knick
on my wrist my leg my arm
something to sooth me
to embrace me in its charm

can I scratch the surface
of my skin
with a needle or a twig
or maybe I can use a match
the pain is quick
the pain will last

welcome to my pity party
yep I feel like shit
can't anything go right in my life
I'm so depressed living
I think its time I quit

so long to those that love me
to the ones that really care
goodbye sorrow and heartache
loneliness and dispair
I'll  slit my wrists tonight
without a single thought or care






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  • Para-Dressage
    September 7, 2007

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    woah...like wow this is really good.
    me like, me like alot nice flow and rhyme
    only thing is 2nd stanza 2nd line you have "mayself" instead of "myself" but still really good


  • Animalia-de-Flux
    September 5, 2007

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    hm, i think it eases the pain if u hurt someone else rather than yourself, call me heartless, but let them scream