When the world was created, God must have looked around, saw what he had done and felt very pleased with this very unique exception.
Where you find yourselves at this moment, are from surrounding elements of hope. The seducer to all optimism, and should either of you think otherwise, then let me tell you now. Look around, you have many success stories about you which you should take note.
Strength builds upon strength and the formality of wedding vows are added to those unsaid.
It goes beyond understanding when you know it feels alright so let them feel what you are seeing then let their wildest dreams believe in yours. What ventures into marriage is a comfort zone unequalled. It is undivided in all manner of forms and forages the unknown at times, then as you both seek awareness the healthy aspect in this is that what you may fear shall be fearless next time. It could be seen as godly I suppose and as God saw that first time around, then you two deserve to be pleased from what fears you first explored then what became.
Your chemisty was right, and all was amalgamated into some evolutionary dream. In fact when we speak of Adam and Eve. The occuring encounters between the two of you will be forever fortunate ones. Take your vows like the endearment of souls looking into each other, not a nugde, one way or the other shall lead away from this perfection.
Author notes
Good luck and best wishes in your new life together. Titus
A contest entry
- Write a poem to be read at my wedding. by tinuelena.
900 points, ended September 23, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hmmmm, i think this poem is absolutely excellent. I like the way you used you wording, very strong, deep. Keep it up
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clever... it kind of
sounds like a toast I've heard before...
no, not really, just the (sort of) rambling tone of it...
I like this... it would make a good mantra...
I don't wink a whole lot in real life, I think it's creepy so I'm using up all of my winking energy for the day in this comment... I am sorry... I'll leave now...
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hehe.
your humor is good and you have quite an impressive vocabulary and refreshing way of writing. 
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I wouldn't have wanted someone to read this for me ever! lol But a fun writing! Shows a humorous side to your work, like it! Refreshing
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I think you are right
in any case, though it is only a poem this seems to be a way of life. Daddy and them spends 15,000$ on a wedding and 500$ on divorce a year or 2 later. COOL!
Smile,
Judy
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lol baby you are so off at times. this is a funny poem , yet I cna see the sincerity in it. Love you
Your ap baby,
Angel
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Now Titus, this is certainly cute! and I do hope the couple think so as well..humor does well within my family, I love it as it is..wtg...SH
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lol. i dint quite get this at first, but after i read it again in a different hat. i realised the joke. i would laugh if this was read out at a wedding, probably not so much if it was mine tho!
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