Sea, your whisper resembles a mermaid's breath,
you leap the heights, dive to depths,
ride the waves of an electric storm,
relentlessly your waves reach toward evening's early light.
You lift seagul's wings,
feathers spread resembling a peacocks ardent display,
gulls follow like a bride's innocent veil.
Heaving masses, spewing frothy spray,
marveling as it dances toward heaven's enticing arms,
changing into gentle, soothing laps,
glinting in union with sun's flashes,
beckoning each searching tide.
Senses sharpened,
awareness heightened,
every fibre electrified,
alive,
then comes the calm,
hearts' peace.... the sea.
Author notes
This piece of work takes no form... it is just a thought process, a part of me!
Please tell me what you think
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The flow of thoughts is really beautiful. I liked the way the poem ended. The first line is beautiful.
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Very, very nice chain of free flying thoughts. I also like to watch the sea, especially in the night, listening their murmur and rush over the cliffs. Bravo Katie.
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beautiful. love the flow and the images you conjure.
xxxx
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Thank you Angelic design for your comments on my poem, I do appreciate it.
~Katie~
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Beautiful katie, you and I are of the same mind with the sea today. The lovely write fills the reader with endless imagery and feeling. Wonderful as always.....mega hugs..mal
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Hi Mal, so pleased you enjoyed this one, the sea, like the sky speaks to us through all its moods.
Megga hugs,
~Katie~
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