Blanketing arms, warming my soul.
Swiping me off my lightened feet.
Placing a hand so gentle upon my
face, you make ocean waves dance,
clouds spell the words I love you
so clear icy sky.
Rise my soul up into burning sun,
fill my veins with water from rays
glow, with passion, heated desires.
As I drift slowly arms of winds soul
back down to earth. Held warm
grasping touch of your smile.
Author notes
"Love is when you dont want to sleep because reality is better than a dream"
A contest entry
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This is a very nice write.My favorite lines are:
Placing a hand so gentle upon my
face, you make ocean waves dance,
clouds spell the words I love you
so clear icy sky.
Thank you for your entry and goodluck to you in the contest.Best Wishes -
Sensational piece, i especially like the line : "you make ocean waves dance" very creative
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This is a vivid description of passion in a big way. I love how you said so much in very little lines. Great job!! Good luck in the contest!!
Jackie ♥ -
This is breath taking I will read this poem again it is very good thank you for entering.
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