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Innocents Denied

Don’t be fooled by the scars that you see

These cuts and bruises are his fantasy

He took my innocents from a young girl

Snatched in the darkness to entertain his world

 

My pain is numb from the years of suffering

Now my puberty to his friends he's offering

I’m trapped in these hand cuffs and chains

My sorrow knows better than to complain

 

If only suicide was an option I could trade

My blood stained tears I’d wipe with a razor blade

But the Devil films my every limited move

I’m a child porn star lost and confused

 

This man is grooming me in his anti-social cult

To entertain these fat and stupid adults

Angel of youth is what I am called

If you saw the images you'd be appalled

 

I swear one-day I'll escape this reality

As God is my witness I'll make him sorry

For I'll find a gun and look him square in the eyes

To ask him why my innocents he denied

 

BANG

 

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  • Ntagatf
    September 5, 2007

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    wow so much emotion I love it, you did an amazing job, i could really feel all the pain and hatred and disgust! Again Great job! I hope this isnt true but if it is i hope everything gets better soon, Thanks for entering my contest and good luck, keep up the good work!!!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    September 5, 2007

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    BREATHTAKINGLY DARK AND SAD

    STUNNING WORK. THE ENDING IS POWERFUL IN THE EXTREME. THIS IS A HEARTBREAKING AND TRAGIC TALE INDEED. CHILD PORN IS ONE OF THE WORST ILLS IN THIS WORLD.

    YOU HAVE PENNED A FANTASTIC AND TRAGIC PIECE ON A CHILD LOSING HER CHILDHOOD, LOSING HER INNOCENCE. THE IMAGERY IS SO GOOD. AND THE DARKNESS IS UNDERLYING COMPLETELY. WELL DONE KATEY YOU HAVE DONE FANTASTIC WORK HERE.

    ALL THE BEST FOR THE CONTEST. THIS TO ME IS A WINNER ALREADY.

    WAYNE
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  • ExpectingMommy18
    September 5, 2007

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    wow all i cn say is WOW!!
    this is a amazing poem and i believe you wont have any trouble winning your contest there...this was amazing as i have said....and thank you for writing a great poem to read!