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tears

Rising up above
white clouds
too high to see
the peaks
my heart feels
the tremble
my soul softly
begins to speak

drifting into another
world of life
with dreams of
mountain tops
my body shakes
and quivers
until my breathing
stops forever

peace love and
joy
find me floating
here
in this space
of endlessness
with all my dreams
once held so dear


burning in tragic tears

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  • lemonhead
    September 7, 2007
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    great job! it is soo sweet and greatly written!


  • pen-inhand
    September 5, 2007
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    So sad Betsy, can I dry your tears my friend....heres some tissue! Love you, Kelly


    • purpledragonfly
      September 7, 2007
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      you're too sweet thanks !!! tears are a great release... Much love to you! Betsy


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    PDF! This is so lovely and so touching...I miss you and would love to hear from you. I really am thinking of you and sending you my love and best wishes!
    Blessings My Dear friend~
    Azlyn


    • purpledragonfly
      September 7, 2007
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      you're sure to hear from me soon - my head's not on properly at the moment tho [well, never is, but it's more crooked than usual- hehee] I'll be back soon. Life is just wild sometimes, but hey I'm okay and always will be esp. with such wonderful friends Much love Always--- PDF

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