Winter wonderland
Majestic feeling of love
Entwined with hope
Summertime heat wave
Roses dance in the meadows
Seductively play
Combination of
Spring and fall, through the playgrounds
Children jump and play
Author notes
Triple haiku on nature...5/7/5
still learning yea i figured i would try here play with the big dogs
A contest entry
- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The middle haiku is very much a haiku and you dont have to have five syllables in the last line to make it a haiku in my opinion. The last hiaku is more like a senryu and the first poem is a poem. I enjoyed reading these and enjoyed the middle poem very much.
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There is a sweetness here, much to contemplate while meditating. not much more could be done.
Love, Tom B.
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Beautifully done sweetheart, you have captured all the seasons in a wonderful set of Haiku. I Love You...Scott
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awww mum this was so beautiful
you really created a masterpiece
i love the form and the flow
it was beautiful
i loved it
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Lovely,
As I've said so many times, you open your heart's door, and so much beauty you bestow sweet soul.
Thanks for sharing, I really like this feel good read, I needed that! Peace, Timothy 
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