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Midnight Moon

Our days have now taken upon their rest
The moments we filled were the best

Night has taken its shadows of glow
To miss you more than .. you would ever know

We held our view... along many paths
Yours is the only one.. I wish to last
the calmness i am seeking will you be here
the peace it brings ..at feeling you near

I can't turn back our hands of time
my only wish  is  for you ..to still be mine
As we sipped each moment and held each one.. close
How does one begin to now let go
when it is our Midnght Moon.... that i'll ever know!

KT

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  • Fiona Hollywood
    September 24, 2007

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    hmm... very nice! Kind of a bitersweet sadness- an acceptence with the past even while you're not pleased by it. Keep up the good work!


    • ICULookn
      September 24, 2007
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      Thanks so kindly, shattered-soapbubble for allowing me your time to read and feedback on my words....It is an appreciation to inspire more....

  • ICULookn
    September 19, 2007
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    Ivy Rose, thank you so kindly for allowing me your feedback on my piece "Midnight Moon" !You inpsire me. bless ya


  • Ivy Rose silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    I love the beautiful sadness you have portrayed here. Wonderful imagery and turning of poetic language. Very good entry into this contest. Best of luck to you.


  • Frozentearz
    September 6, 2007

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    I also felt sadness yet beauty,
    one of those writes that makes you feel,
    great work and great to see you posting,
    big hugz,
    Frozentearz

    • ICULookn
      September 19, 2007
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      Frozentearz my sis, my inspiration im deeply in appreciation for your comment on my piece.. thanks for allowing me to have you feedback...
      iculookn


  • transcendental baby gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    This is lovely ... the sadness of loss is tempered by the beauty of the words. Beautifully done

    • ICULookn
      September 19, 2007
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      transcendental baby ...my such a great potress indeed, thanks sis..for continuing to inspire me to pen better. thansk for reading my poem...

      k~


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    This sure is deeper than I expected...love and faith outlast hope at times,thanks for entering and good luck..SH

    • ICULookn
      September 19, 2007
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      misticmoonlite ..thank you ..thank you for a great contes.. and for allowing me to express my pen and recive your most inspiring feedback and also for the honorable mention trophy......


      iculookn

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