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If you could see time

Imagine how different life would be,
If you could look out your window and see,
Time flowing by without a care in the world
As to who is watching and not waiting on anyone.
Nobody would wait until they were dying to live.
They may take a few more chances along the way,
Take that moment so long ago and steal that kiss.

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  • Astaraelneth
    October 25, 2008
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    You have given me great feedback-i like this one too, paints a great picture in my mind...


  • heygoo
    September 5, 2007

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    Time indeed marches on. Perhaps if we could see it slipping we would as you say not wait until dying to live.