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Serenity Of Soul~

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  My precious brother,
    you're every sunset
  and each breath of morning dew.

  Like the mountains peak
    I see your huge heart
  sincere within sighs of love.

    You embrace beauty,
  even through valley's below
    I believe within my soul;


  Faithfulness comforts the wind.

    A melody plays,
  as I gaze into the light
  compassion mends the broken


  Another day, a new song sings.

  While his guitar,
  strums heartstrings.

  I feel the whispering breeze,
     as his potent poetry
  flows like a river of dreams.

   Healing verses of nature,
   nurture the voids of today
  through the art within his heart.

  Perfecting it with lines divine
    anew, a fresh day rises
  and love overflows his soul.

     I call him brother,

                                  and friend.

Author notes

Picture: Let-the-Music-Live-Again- by Ernie Cselko;
Background By: PerfectImperfection (Sis Wendy)
Congrates Dear Brother, Much Love Always, Bro T~

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  • Poetress52 gold member
    September 18, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Nice soft flow, heartfelt, good imagery, a very good read, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work


  • Arkbear gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    Wow ~

    Hey....this was cool....I was reading it at the same time

    as some good rock band was playing on my radio on the desk.....and it went well together....weird ~

     

    Great presentation as well ~

     

    Nice background by Wendy ~

     

    Later,

     

    Bear ~


  • penman gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    Excellent

    A very special and touching poem for kaibab. Truly skillful and heartfelt. Very best of luck in the contest.


  • Darkend
    September 9, 2007

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    Stunning

    Wow...the only word for this poem. I love the way you mix nature into this poem. Its calming and wonderful...thank you for writing it.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    It is as if you call upon nature,
    summon the natural beauty to eulogize your friend.
    A touching tribute, soft as a gentle breeze,
    or strong as the climb to the mountain's peak.

    Aesthete


  • kaibab silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    There in no more sincere, or open window,
    that weaves poetic, his path of welcome,
    for you are ever inviting,
    hand extended in friendship,
    smiling morning, inside of circle
    glowing across my mountain's soul embrace.

    Thanks so much Timothy...and thanks fro being such a Bro to me and your angel sis as well...
    a wonderful poem here...such a gift


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    Bro.....You are such a dear..Thank you for pouring out your heart on the page to out dear friend....
    TY for joining in the celebration!

    Lynda


  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    you are such a kind and loving soul

    love speaks in all your poems in any subject you write. I hope you win every contest on this site. You are deserving.
    Love,
    Judy


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 5, 2007

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    WONDERFULLY SWEET

    Such a beautiful dedication to your Brother and dear friend faithfulness comforts the wind...I call him brother You are so wonderful at dedications...your words flow so soft and smooth like a caress to the heart Thank you my sweet pet...and kisses to you


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    this was such a beautiful write and a wonderful dedication
    so full of emotion and your words were beautiful
    well done


  • JoyfulWriter
    September 5, 2007

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    This is quite breathtaking not only in graphics but the words..they show a heart most loving....a piece most worthy of praise...so well expressed...thanks for sharing your beautiful soul...best of luck...smiles, Terry


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    September 5, 2007
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    Such a tender and beautiful write..
    Another gift from your amazing pen..
    Peace
    ~A~


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    September 5, 2007
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    this is so sweet way to go i loved the words you used great poem, much love..xoxox


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 5, 2007
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    Well penned piece. touching to one that is dear to you im sure.
    May you be blessed

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