A slow time turning
Fall into this Winter Springs
Summer comes again.
A contest entry
- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
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Short and sweet
Nice work -
interesting this is true
and seasons would have worked here for you
just look at athem all
Riftkin -
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Thanks!
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Very good
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Interesting title for a haiku. Like two titles in one really. Liked the use of all four seasons in those two lines - works well here.
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Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it tons!
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